The doom trail — Story, Setting & Ideas

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Smith, Arthur D. Howden (Arthur Douglas Howden), 1887-1945 Project Gutenberg 2023 Not confirmed
Historical fiction; Canada -- History -- To 1763 (New France) -- Fiction; United States -- History -- Colonial period, ca. 1600-1775 -- Fiction; Fur trade -- Fiction; Iroquois Indians -- Fiction Readers of public-domain and historical texts
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A historical novel set in colonial North America, following a young man's journey through the Iroquois Long House and French-English rivalries, framed by a prologue that addresses the reader as a council fire guest.
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They were on me in an instant, my first assailant in front, an assassin on either hand, slashing with hangers and cutlasses that knew no tricks of fence, but only downright force. Their former prey was left with one to handle.

"Get to his rear, one of you, fools," snarled the ruffian in command whilst he pounded at my guard.

But I backed into a handy doorway and barely managed to fend them off. And all the while the real object of their attack continued his appeals for the watch.

'Twas this which spoiled the fray for me. I could not but wonder, as I dodged and parried and thrust, what would happen if his cries should be heard and the watch appear. Would they know me? Or perchance should I have the opportunity to slip quietly away?

I stole a glance about me. Several windows had gone up along the street, and nightcapped heads protruded to add their clamor to that of my friend.

Surely-- Aye, they had done it. The ruffian on my left leaped back with ear aslant toward the alley entrance.

"Quick, bullies," he yelled. "'Tis the watch!"

With a celerity that was almost uncanny they disengaged their blades and melted into the fog. Their footfalls dwindled around the corner as I detected the clumping footfalls of the approaching guardians of London's peace.

This brought me to my senses. I sheathed my sword and ran across the roadway, glancing to right and left for the best route of escape. But I reckoned without the other participant in our brawl.

"Be at ease, my master," he said in a voice which had a good thick Dorset burr in it--I liked him from that moment. It sounded so homelike; I could fairly see the rolling fields, the water meadows, the copses, all the scenes that had meant so much to me in boyhood, even the sprawling roofs and chimney stacks of Foxcroft House itself.

"I have reasons not to be at ease," I answered dryly, and would have passed him, but he clutched my arm.

"We have seen an end to the rascals," he strove to reassure me. "'Tis only the watch you hear. Hark to the jingling of their staves."

"I know that full well, my friend," I answered him, goose-flesh rising on my neck as the jingling staves and clumping feet drew nearer; and my thoughts fastened upon the dungeons of the Tower about which we had heard frequent tales at St. Germain. "But I happen to have pressing reasons for avoiding the watch."

My friend pursed his lips in a low whistle.

"So sets the wind in that quarter! Yet you came fast to my help against those cut-purses a moment back."

I laughed. The watch were all but in the alley's mouth. 'Twas idle to think of running now. Indeed, to have done so would have been to banish whatever slight chance I might have had.

"Oh, I am no highwayman," I said.

"Well, whatever you may be, you aided Robert Juggins in his peril, and 'twill be a sore pity if a Worshipful Alderman of the City may not see you through the scrutiny of a band of lazy bench-loafers."

"That is good hearing," I answered.

"Will they have your description?"

"I think not, but if they ask me to account for myself I shall be at fault. I am but lately landed from France, and I have no passport."

He pursed his lips once more in the quaint form of a low whistle.

"I begin to see. Well, my master, we will talk of your plight anon. For the present I have somewhat to say to our gallant rescuers which will put their thoughts upon other matters than young men fresh landed from France without passports to identify themselves by."

He swept a shrewd glance over me from my hat to my heels.

"There is a foreign cut to your wig that I do not like," he commented. "However, we will brazen it out. Here they come."

The watchmen rounded the corner into the alley, lanterns swinging high, staves poised.

"Ho, knaves," proclaimed a pompous voice, "stand and deliver yourselves to us."

"And who may you be?" demanded my friend.

"No friends to brawlers and disturbers of the peace, sirrah," replied the stoutest of the watchmen, stepping to the front of his fellows. "We are the duly constituted and appointed constables and watchmen of his Honor the Worshipful Lord Mayor."

"It would be nearer truth to say that you are the properly constituted and habituated sleepers and time-servers of the city," snapped my companion. "Draw nearer, and examine me."

"Be not rash, captain," quavered one of the watchmen. "He hath the appearance of a most desperate Mohock."

The novel opens with a prologue that directly addresses the reader, inviting them to rest at a Council Fire before setting foot on the long trail into Yesterday. The narrator, speaking as a member of the Ho-de-no-san-nee (the Iroquois League), offers a White Belt as a token of straight words. This framing device establishes a ceremonial tone and positions the reader as a participant in a remembered world, where the Long House is scattered and the trails of war parties are wiped out by white men's roads.

The prologue mourns the loss of the Great League, the Council Fire at Onondaga, and the Roy-an-ehs who once ruled from the Great Lakes to the Sioux and Cherokee lands. Yet it also asserts that once the Iroquois were strong, and even the white man feared them, choosing which European power should rule. This opening sets up a narrative that moves between the Iroquois perspective and the colonial struggles of French and English.

The Prologue as a Structural Frame

The prologue is not merely an introduction but a structural device that shapes the reader's experience. It uses the metaphor of a Council Fire, tobacco leaves, and a White Belt to create a ritual space. The narrator speaks in the first-person plural (“we of the Ho-de-no-san-nee”), blending collective memory with a lament for a lost era. This voice recurs only in the prologue, suggesting that the main narrative will be told from a different perspective—likely a white protagonist. The shift from the prologue's ceremonial language to the direct action of Chapter I, which begins with a fray in Mincing Lane, marks a stark transition from mythic recollection to historical adventure.

Recurring Images of Trails and Doors

The title The Doom Trail is echoed throughout the excerpts by references to trails, doors, and paths. The prologue mentions the Long House with its Eastern Door guarded by Mohawk Wolves and Western Door by Seneca Wolves, opening onto the Thunder Waters of Jagara. Later, Joncaire speaks of controlling intercourse between western tribes and the English, and of a fort that threatens the Iroquois. The imagery of trails—both literal and metaphorical—recurs: the “long trail” into Yesterday, the “Great Trail” of the Iroquois, and the “Doom Trail” itself. These paths are not just routes but symbols of power, trade, and survival in a contested wilderness.

Movement Between Settings: London to the Wilderness

The excerpts show a deliberate movement between contrasting settings. Chapter I is set in Mincing Lane, London, a mercantile hub, while later scenes shift to the Canadian wilderness, where Joncaire discusses fortifications and trade. The prologue situates the reader in an abstract, mythic space, but the narrative quickly grounds itself in specific locations: a London street, a fort on a river, a council chamber. This movement mirrors the colonial expansion of the period, as characters travel from the Old World to the New, and from European centers to frontier outposts. The contrast between the cramped lanes of London and the vast forests of New France underscores the scale of the conflict.

Voice and Dialogue in the Excerpts

The excerpts reveal a variety of voices. The prologue uses a formal, oratorical style with repeated phrases (“O my reader”) and Iroquois terminology. In contrast, the dialogue between Joncaire and Jean is colloquial and peppered with French exclamations (“Mon Dieu”, “tonnerrr-rrr-rr-re de Dieu”). Joncaire's speech is pragmatic and cynical, as when he explains that trade mastery leads to military mastery. The narrator's voice in the main text is more neutral, but the prologue's distinct tone suggests that the author is experimenting with perspective. The use of Iroquois names and concepts (Ga-oh, Ha-wen-ne-yu) adds authenticity, though the excerpts do not reveal how consistently this is maintained.

Readers should pay attention to how the prologue's ceremonial framing colors the subsequent narrative. The novel's structure—moving from London to the wilderness, from council fires to trading posts—invites comparison between European and Indigenous worldviews. The recurring imagery of trails and doors may foreshadow key turning points. Approach the text as a historical adventure that uses its setting to explore themes of power, loss, and cultural collision, but remember that the excerpts offer only glimpses of a longer journey.

Sitting with The Doom Trail, I kept thinking about how the council fire prologue makes you feel like a guest at a story. That same sense of being quietly ushered into a contested world—where borders shift like river currents—returned to me later, almost unbidden, while considering 54-40 or Fight — A Reader’s Guide. It’s a different century, yet the same ache of land and allegiance lingers.

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    Craig Wanda Barr - 2 weeks ago
    {'rating': 1, 'text': 'The Doom Trail fails to deliver on its premise. The supernatural elements are underdeveloped, and the plot is predictable. The characters are one-dimensional, and the prose is mediocre. It feels like a generic western with a half-hearted twist. Not recommended.'}

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